Most people would agree that smoking is not good for the environment and your guy’s family . Your mental health , it is REALLY unattractive . Smoking makes your teeth yellow and you’ll get lung cancer and mouth cancer . You don’t wanna end up like my Whaea Jasmine going out for “FrEsH aIr’ during breaktime and asking people for perfume , it smells disgusting and makes you look disgusting . People spend thousands of dollars on smokes when they can buy at least a car or house.
A sensible idea would be to tell someone you see to quit and tell them that they could get yellow teeth , lung cancer or mouth cancer. Around 4500 to 5000 people die yearly in NZ caused by smoking. Carrying around a smoke makes you look unattractive and disgusting.
Here are two reasons why you should quit smoking! One – It makes your clothes, hair, house ect smell like stale old smokes. Two – People throw cigarette butts and still smokeable smokes into the ocean and kill or extinct most marine animals.
Surely you would agree that having clean air is better than second-hand smoked air from a disgusting smoker?
EVERYBODY knows that smoking is unhealthy and disgusting, some kids grow up around smokers and when they’re older they might start. So maybe try to stop smoking to make sure your child doesn’t grow up as a smoker!
Yours sincerely,
Arihana.
Great persuasive writing.I liked the way you said that whaea go out for Fresh air.If i was a smoker and i had read that i would stop smoking thats how encouraging it is.